Latest Work (updated (again))

Well my first real short story is finally done.  I would like to get around to posting it.  But just to let you know, it's Science Fiction.

On a side note, it's been edited by three people (including myself), that's a first for me.

Update: I'll post it in pieces.  There are technically no chapters, so the pieces are just random.
Update 2: Forget it, I posted the entire thing.

Click here to read it.